haha yea, mgmt consulting felt like it aligned the most with the dungeon theme. lack of branched endings was also to make users feel stuck, but could also use different endings where larry is stuck in each of them. thanks for the feedback
That was nicely written, and had a surprising amount of depth for a game jam entry! The pacing felt "right", no rushing, or walls of text. Would have been nice to see Larry's life changing some way due to the dream, but I get why it ended the way it did. Overall, good job!
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Interesting use of the concept. Wish it had branching endings. But overall, well done.
Also. Fricken "Management Consulting"...
haha yea, mgmt consulting felt like it aligned the most with the dungeon theme. lack of branched endings was also to make users feel stuck, but could also use different endings where larry is stuck in each of them. thanks for the feedback
I am also having trouble being unable to scroll through the whole story :(
It seems that when you updated the frame due to Daid's comment on the jam submission page, you messed something up.
i didn't have the scroll bars enabled, but should be fixed now. Thanks for letting me know!
I'm not able to scroll the screen. Have you tried allowing the game to be maximized?
i didn't have the scroll bars enabled, but should be fixed now. Thanks for letting me know!
That was nicely written, and had a surprising amount of depth for a game jam entry! The pacing felt "right", no rushing, or walls of text. Would have been nice to see Larry's life changing some way due to the dream, but I get why it ended the way it did. Overall, good job!
Thank you! I was going for a sense of hopelessness haha